the panning is uncomfortable, but I am guessing that was what you were trying to do. Whenever I hear a melody panned to one side I panic that my headphones broke... But yeah the actual melody and stuff is nice.
Dark, but nice. With that glimmer of hope. I have no clue what I am saying I am just typing stuff. Oh the beat is crushed... That reverb is nicely done. Ill stop. I like this.