> in general, very cute, but could be fleshed quite a bit. (this is all imo, natch). some good ideas, but they could go further. i think you have the space to even add another layer
> bass could definitely have a little more automation to give it a little more character.
> looooove ~
0.47
. great great sound; crazy for it. could possibly add a small pan oscillation?
> consider making your own noise sweeps! they're easy and more fun/shapeable
not too fond of the wobbly noise around
1:20
; it's a neat idea, but i wish it had just a little more tone to it--or perhaps had a tone fade in to it. or maybe panned back and forth in a patterned way. dunno, that sound just sounds a little underdeveloped to me.
Lol this is awesome dude, I didn't realize how much potential this track until you had showed me! Anyways, you don't have to give me credit it's all yours.