@Brutality
thank you for the input but this song isnt finished yet at all and your right too. Something much similar to this is Multiverse scroll down my page and listen it's much better
thank god, something that isn't a loop fart, also some things sound out of place, it is my recommendation you look into scales, they are really easy to learn and can make your music fantastic, if you already know about them enough to make music in key, sorry for bringing it up, but i do feel as though there's something not quite fitting together properly, then again im an amateur so what do i know lol
@Brutality
thank you for the input but this song isnt finished yet at all and your right too. Something much similar to this is Multiverse scroll down my page and listen it's much better