Hey, good job so far. I'm guessing you were trying to tame your snare drum a bit since you had few plugins there and it still sounds a bit too harsh in my opinion. Instead of using EQ you can simply use a filter on Heisenberg (I tried moving it all the way to the left and it really helps) plus you can get interesting rhythmic patterns by setting up Delay to 8th notes and level up. But overall it's all good!