oo. this is awesome. i think u gotta control your high frequencies a bit more. it kinda gets out of control in some places. also the lightning is really loud sometimes. but this is so cool. really great seeing more drum and bass lately. u have inspired me to make dnb now lol.
Not really a fan of the melody, doesn't really feel natural, but that's something you can easily learn to work on. That saw that comes in @
00:31
is REALLY harsh on the ears, maybe lower the volume a bit and control the high freqs. The rest of the intro is pretty nice, I like the use of the ambiance samples. The drop is actually really nice, I love the saw bass, and the lead is pretty cool despite the weird chord melody. The post drop also seems bit plain, and the 2nd build could be better.
The kick needs more low-end in my opinion. There's a 'click' each time it hits in a section of the song.
01:22
to
01:44
and
02:28
could use some swiping in the frequencies because it's some elements you don't need pushed in the song that can interfere with other instruments. Maybe a few more layers of the sub bass could push the song to new heights? I like what you got going here btw, it takes the cake for a supported festival song.