00:00 the distorting-low background should be reverbed to be more airy.
0:11 , to much loudness or whatever is making that sound high (high end or waveshaper)
00:26 good drop, but if you want it more gothy (i think that's what youre trying to do). a slope and a chrous (speed: 10% spread : 100%) slope >> (low slope option, 2000-3000 in freq.)
For the second part backdrop of low-airy noise, just copy the same stuff I said abt it in the start of it.
00:17 , dont make it a sudden stop, let it go-