it definately has a good toon, but at the one part where you switched to the offbeat, you shouldve added a little more because it set the tune a bit off with the sudden change. overall its amazing. :3
Nice Mega, I like the style.. I'm more of a hardcore person myself, so I would do some hard stuff with this here, but style nice. Keep up the good work.... Check out this one I did recently called Nemesis. Let me know what you think.
Nemesis