This isnt even 2 minutes, ill finish a track one day, promise
But nah really, im going to this music college today where I live for a 3rd interview kinda thing so this track is to show them really, critique me though obviously
I had a little more in depth comment, but it was too long and i lost it, so i had to rewrite. Sry. Also, sry if this doesn’t make any sense, just trying to help from your request post.
What i would recommend to extend it would be A + A(but you should play with adding some vocals from the B/C part) + B + C + Y + Z(you should flesh this out into an entire melodic line) + [Z with percussion] + A + B + Y + Z + C + Y + D