that speed up then slow down i think you should just complete get rid of. or make it way more subtle.. and as for the drop there seems to be a section of silence before the tag comes in and to me it kinda ruins the vibe almost (respectfully).. as for mixing it sounds alright maybe just a few tweaks here and there to make everything blend together but overall you did a good job. it was a great attempt
I tried a new intro its far from perfect. And as far as mixing i feel it could be better but much better than before. Any criticism or if u think u could help out uch appreciated tnks :3