You are welcome. Please return the favor with my works. I think the best way to get better is by hearing the truth from others who speak as listeners and not makers of music. That's when we can really consider what we've done and make it better.
It's cool. I particularly like the 2nd half. I think it's too short though. I bet that, judging by your latest changes, you could improve this song by editing it a bit more. Slice parts, move them around, play with the effects and what not. You're very good in my opinion, you've just got to master the editing to be great. Well done mate and I look forward to hearing the final cut.