A lot better, still, some things are bothering me. You know, with only reducing the volume not all probs are fixed. I see you EQ'd some things, but with the EQ you pumped up the Final dB of most EQs, making it very dominant f.e. the bass. It's waaay to loud man. I'm saying this as an advice to maybe sidechain compress the bass to the drums, making the drums more dominant, and not the bass. Or you can decrease the lower end of the bass
Like the glasses :P I like the changed melody! And those wobbles :O those are perfect!!! And try compressing that SOB. EQing compressing needs done. Some sounds are nice though!! Shalom :P