Nice one, but i would've like some more deep frequenties in it :) Or some growl like basses to pop up at some random points, to make it a little more interesting.
And what about the bass that already exist? You thing it should be at lower freqs? Cuz my speakers aren't that good for the lows. On headphones it's coll, but not sure for the speakers...
I know what you mean. You're right, but i like the structure of the track to be more stable, without too much random changes. Maybe some tom would work nice, ha :)