It may be the fact that it's not sidechained (heavily) and I'm not used to hearing stuff without (much of) it but Idk.
The reese also sounds a bit muddy at
1:27
to me. I'd suggest cutting off a bit more of those higher frequencies (probably around 1000hz-2500hz), or lowering them, to make it sound slightly better.
I don't know why you're a co-author but this song is just me and JayFK. The link was on invite everyone so I guess it included you although it wasn't intended to
My crit will be in pieces as I listen again and again and fight with character limitations lol.
\first crit, right off the bat: This track feels like it has too much reverb. I'm getting a lot of muddiness
@00
:10-
00:11
when the volume increases and other parts come in. Instead of doing such a drastic and quick change as you did, I recommend you extending the length of that volume build possibly starting at
00:00
and increasing on a 40-45% slope
The last thing I will critique, if I may, is the composition. The intro needs work and the second half of the track needs to be mixed better so that it compliments the first half but offers something new and exciting enough to keep people engaged and listening to the whole track. There's two verses and choruses, to be super forgiving, but the transitions almost don't exist. I would like to hear you do more work on your transitions and auxiliary sounds.
Then do the opposite, play the track at a very loud volume on your output equipment, and listen to hear what sounds are unpleasant, or too loud etc. This is a good starting technique to mastering a track and finding out what parts shine, or don't, and which ones need more love.