the melody is a bit too dead-mono imo, a lot of variation, which is good. Again, some frequencies seem a bit too loud mostly in the highs and in the mids as well, Id cut a bit from the higher mids mostly, because there was some unpleasant feedback in unnecessary places. But otherwise I didnt notice anything. Also the freqs are just my opinion for what sounds good to me. Overall I think this is decent, keep up the work!
Agree with audiotool man, it has its negatives but its overall a pretty solid track. Melodies arent my favorite, thats more of a personal preference though. drums are mixed nicely, 808 is relatively clean. nothing is really that bad, i just dont think im into this one personally. solid work none the less from you two, i like the experimentation :)