Besides there being a significant lacking of mixing, the biggest thing is that the growls sound like they're from 2011. Honestly everything kinda does. Otherwise, the ideas are certainly nice.
I like the idea but there needs to be a lot more improvements. Like fix the transition and
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, the kick pattern sounds off beat at
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and I personally think the riser needs a lot more work at
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because it's kinda corny with just using the pitch up on the main synth rather than using a riser among other things.