tbh, this is pretty flat. I appreciate the melody a lot; very pretty and spacey. but idk it feels like its missing something fundamental. I think that the implied rhythm with the modulation of the chords is okay, but id like to hear those 8ths more pronounced in the percussion.
yeah, im not too pleased with this one. it had more texture, was like 3:40 long, and an actual melody line, but for some reason audiotool didn't save any changes for an hour and a half and i lost that progress. said fuck it in my frustration