if you can... this is gonna be hard for you and very tidious, but it will all be worth it in the end. its hard to explain to you everyday, even in person, but i promise you this... if u take the time and watch tutrials on youtube for Ausdiotool, results will improve. u just need to really take the time tio pay attention, take notes if you have to (thats what i did)
too simple. all u have is a sample, hats, clap, and drums... and it isn't mixed at all or thoroughly layed out and looped... what i need you to do is, instead of rushing through a track and just putting in the drums and calling it good, you need to make sure u lay your drums out with as much emotion and sound as you possibly can. make patterns with your drums (i don't mean 'create pattern track', i mean create and actual rhythm with your drums), and play around with synths for counter melodies