I think this is alright. U should add another sound to match the small "OEh" sound @
0:15
to make a harmony/Double Melody to make it sound better. I like it! If u re-publish this and keep the whole Layout of the song the same it would be great! Loving The Drums! Beware that they don't become 2loud (volume), cause the drums will "take over" the song... I think you can go for more of that Ambient feel, that I'm getting from the song. I really like hearing it from
1:02
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1:04
. But that's really short :P
hi, this is wonderful melodywork, the drums are a bit to metallic sounding for me, maybe try to make sound better (red lights at the mixer),,,,,anyways love it