i may not remember Version 1 much, but while im here i must really express how awesome the drum beat is, i didn't notice it the first time, but the hihat goes very nicely with the kick :D, i can also enjoy the sfx on things, i don't know what they are, which indicates they are blended well and doing their intended job, and you can tell how much they help :D
while i may not be a fan of certain parts of the track, i can say that it is all very well made, my only recommendation is pan a few of the supporting synths to give them a bit of their own space, mind you im using speakers so maybe there is panning im just not picking up, either way it could help it it a little, excellent track