This quite good. But go try and fix up the intro it gets a little too fast in there for my taste (Maybe just me) Also. Sidenote: The rasselblock is a little overwhelming but its a good idea. I understand this isn't finished but get those things done and finish it and i would love the hell out of this
I understand that this isn't completely finished yet, but for the intro, you could lay off the Rasselbock some. It's pretty overwhelming. Also, what you did with the lead at
00:23
was interestingly intriguing. Nonetheless, it does need some work. I can't wait to hear how it turns out, keep it up and keep working on it! ^-^