Yeah thank you soo much arche and tophat you've been right with me about 8 months ago no and it means a lot hearing criticism as well as compliments you guys brighten my day!!! Thank you soo much!!!
to be honest I actually love this son alot!! and I also enjoyed enjoyed making but I do see the lack in bass and phrasing. and
@tophat
Im not one to notice melodies but this one actually really made me think of that for some reason. I do like my synth work also too. but thank you for the input ill be sure to get more bassy stuff.
I think you did a good job. I see what top at is saying. There doesn't seem to be phrasing in the melodies where you know where one phrase/sentence ends and another begins. It makes it sound like a run-on to my ears. But there is a whole set of music designed to fdo that, so I wouldn't say it's bad thing. Synths are cool too. Like them
Hmm...I will be honest, maybe the high frequencies aren't my taste, but I couldn't really connect with a certain theme or melody with this song, it felt as if everything was everywhere! Nice synth work though, sorry if I offend! But it does sound like some really familiar game music...and transitions..maybe a bit smoother... But I do like that break around
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:p very light indeed!