After more than six months of trying new things and experimenting (and putting it off bc of school stuff lol), I finally made a track that, tbh, I'm pretty proud of! Hope you like it :D
I think that you need more bass layers since the drop has a lot of empty space. You can fatten it up by giving it more lows and mids. The bass will basically give the song more energy. As for the mixdown, you did a good job with that. But I would focus more on EQ'ing so you can shape your sound and get it how you want it.