Cover of track I Spied My Neighbor by ATHeat
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I Spied My Neighbor

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There is a big difference between peace, joy, mayhem, and war.

Although I prefer joy, mayhem is her equalizer. “To every action there is always opposed an equal reaction.” -Newton

Once I sat in joyful silence

pondering the light of day

and in my glee I spied my neighbor

Her brow of sweat and blouse a fray.

I chanced a glance and saw her bosom

and then in shame I turned away.

All is well I hope and dread.

My countenance a chagrin red.

Within my blunder I failed to notice

her spouse at home in his off day.

The jealous husband at my door

what once was joy is now dismay.

Now I sit upon a bed

and all my bones beside me lay.

T’is the story of my fault

and chance again I’ll turn away.

Although my poem does not reflect my personal life, it is rather fitting.

Enjoy,

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    The B-ST

    Sounds unique in a beautiful way.

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    tornsage

    unreal innovative sound !

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    ATHeat

    Thanks Frozenskull.

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    Frozenskull

    I really just realized how great sounding your stuff is :) really beautiful stuff

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    ATHeat

    Thanks Andy.

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    Andy

    The transition starting at 1:39 with the horns, and building to 2:01 is something really special. It is unsettling but still engaging, then it gets smoothed out with an excellent resolution. This track is unique and left me wanting to relisten, so I did.

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    ATHeat

    Thanks friend.

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    Pathfinder

    love your story telling emotional music! :D

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    ATHeat

    Thanks Yorketown.

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    Yorketown

    it gets cheerful around the 1 minute mark. i like it

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    ATHeat

    Thanks Rysco.

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    Rysco

    nice

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    ATHeat

    Thanks Mike.

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    Mad∞Scientist∞Mike

    wicked cool tune man :D

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