title: dicks out for vulkron
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This is something I actually wanna finish, unlike some of my other shit (including the ones that apparently charted lmao)
Please:
-crit
-crit harshly
-dont remake (i know what your thinking astron, im gonna pick on you specifically XDD)
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anyyways, i really like this, good luck finishing it!
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Never Go Down!! I think thats a good name
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also sounds like this was inspired by martin so if you wanted a title you could use something computer related because martin likes to call his tracks stuff like virus, error 404, proxy, keygeb ect. maybe syntax lol idk
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also you could maybe change the last chord the second time the chord progression loops so its the same chord but maybe in a different position. (eg if it was c, e and g, you could change the chord notes to be e, g and c on the top). the chord change idea might not work and its not really necessary, but it could add variation which would make it sound more interesting.
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make the chords a bit louder and the white noise a bit quieter, because the chords sound really nice but they're kinda being drowned out by the white noise.
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Too much high end. You could add some really nice riser if you do that. Could be slightly more progressive.
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Here's my crit: Try making the second to last note in the loop higher.
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Actually, if what's shown here is 2 loops, do every other loop having the change.
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That kind of messed up, but oh well.
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Ultra Apple!
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Title: Genesis
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Title Idea: Ideosyncratic
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Republished
Repub, crit and help with da title pl0x
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honestly the chords sound like martin garrix in terms of sound design and harmonically
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honestly the sound design is amazing. i have a lot of crit tho. first off, this sounds really rought, i dunno if u put tube on anything or it just sounds to loud. It does need to be turned down a lot. it feels really empty, it needs a lot of background fx like an arp a crowd noise and maybe even a long voice on the root key. also, it needs a stronger bass, i suggest a square with a tube and a slope on default settings. but i can see this being really really good
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Republished
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