i dont really like this at all lol but it was in my drafts and i figured why not...better then nothin...hopefully at least 1 person will like it..also i didnt have enought room for the title" i hate when i put to much jelly on my sammich and it gets everyhwre" so i had to improvise
:) i would just fix the clipping as far as technique is concerned . as far as suggestions I would suggest lots of sample cut ups and some back ground textures maybe switch the beat to dub step and some Synth work :)