oo this is actually pretty dam decent for ur first try at slap house bro! :D
just a few tips for ya man :D :
1. the bass and kick are very badly mixed, especially in the drop, which results in too much volume and overlapping frequencies. This leads to clipping and usually unwanted distortion, which ultimately ends up with a not-so-clean mix.
2. the sound design is repetitive, and not the best, but u are still new so just keep that in mind lol :D