Please note: Even though this is not my favorite genre (or one of them), I still recognize how well the piece was composed. Composition, the way I mean, is how well it was done. For example, this one has good transitions and adds other elements to the mix in a very good fashion. It all culminates to a wonderfully done piece, even though this is not the kind of thing that I would listen to.
I think you got across your theme very well, while still having an excellently composed piece, but I have noticed something about Audiotool (or maybe me): Everyone's songs are too long, as is this one. If you were to cut out some bits that don't change, I think it could be even better than it is.
I mostly appreciate those track made without the use of sampled audio clips but this one definitely deserves to be an exception! Very powerfull bass line and i like that!