As I've said, the tuning and tonality of your synths is way off still. Do you know any music theory? Even if it's only basic stuff it'll help a lot to learn some
PLEASE STOP MAKING COMMENTS ABOUT HOW THIS RELATES TO MY MOTHER, NONE OF YOU HAVE ANY IDEA ABOUT WHO MY MOTHER IS AND WHAT SHE IS ABOUT, PLEASE JUST LISTEN TO THE MUSIC.
Hmm. Okay let's break this down from the beginning. Your synth at the beginning is very shrill. Also, the note choice is a little. . . creepy? for something I'd expect to be given to a mother. It's very much atonal, which isn't necessarily bad, but then it gets kinda shrill and feels like it's meant to be scary and offputting more than anything else. I think you might want to study some more traditional music theory before you attempt atonality, it's very difficult to get right.
There's some stuff here that's off pitch. It sounds better at
2:56
, but gets weird again at
3:46
. It has a very nice atmosphere to it, but it's just off tune. That kick explosion at
3:57
should also be lowered a bit.