mastering is better, some of the high end at
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and the notes repeating further on should be subdued definitely or cut off slightly (it clips a bit), either by using curve or slope. The background static noise coming from the very beginning could b pitched better using a curve/slope also, it doesn't sound in tune with the mix. Def sounds better compared to last time so good job. Also to add, there is literally no low end/no bass but I think it was intentional to keep it that way if you like:)
The whole mix needs to mastered better and louder. Since you asked for feedback, my crit will be limited because it is just a sample. All I suggest is learning more mixing/mastering tools on AT :)