like ziroh said, change it a up a bit later in the song, add some more synths, seems like the bass is really carrying the whole track, and i can barely hear the piano in some parts, so maybe up the piano a bit, maybe by like 3-5 db or maybe turn the bass down by a similar amount
Then that muted bass comes in followed by the sub? very nice. You start automating the piano a bit and that sounds neat and keeps things interesting.
The highlight of this track is for sure that stutter/sweep sound at
00:55
and in your other transitions as well.
when you come back to the pattern at
01:04
, I think it may be advantageous to add a new sound, to make the second half different than the first, and to keep the listening ears interested
Now what I'm about to say next is completely my opinion in terms of composition, but I think if you made that second verse different than the first you could play that and then transition back in to the intro/outro starting at
01:46
or around there somewhere (wherever the first note on that piano hits).
Just something I should probably say, I used this mostly as an experiment to try editting samples, something I've never done before. Therefore, the draft is mostly audiotracks, machinists, and effects.