Thank you all for your comments and time; I reall don't know what sub sub cateogry this goes under , if someone could tell I'd much appreciate it thank in andavance !
i think cutting the mids from the Kicks and snares are a mistake :)
To On the Snare Try adding a white noise hit with a woody snap snare with a dampened reverb .. with the kick i would layer two kicks one with a nice Dance style Bump to it and The other with Not so bassy a good Mid range click to the hit :) hope that helps