hey soundhunter, i must agree with tyburn, there is a bit of an unwritten rule not to spam your tracks around, honestly i listen to all people i feel connected with, by talking and listening to them and there's creativity, you made a nice track, the volume difference is to big, try the compressor to begin with and keep it up my friend, i always respect every's creativity in any way, stay focussed ;-)
Well done but please be aware that posting links to your music on my wall can get a little annoying. I'll always be checking your music every so often (as I try check on everyone that I'm following) so you don't need to keep posting links. Good work using the heisenberg but as some advice for future tracks try to think of the levels of everything as this is a really loud mix.