Great tune, very nice melody. I love the overdriven sound. One thing though, the drums seem a little murky to me (maybe just a personal preference). I'd use a tighter, more percussive kick & probably amp up the snare, for more clarity. I sometimes use 2 bass drums together if I want to keep the depth but also make it stand out more. Others may have better advice, I'm still mew at this. =)