Don't take any of this personally, but here we go.
- The rap vocals are off-tempo and I'd suggest not panning them 100% to the left, have them closer to the middle.
- I like the electric guitars- Well, I like the entire instrumental of this track tbh.
- I feel like whatever that is at 1:43 could be a bit softer so it won't jumpscare anyone (That may be intentional tho so don't mind this one)
- I think the vocals are a bit too loud compared to the instrumental (just a little)
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