but lil sparky... what the hell were you going for? its a random melody which needs a low pass, and drums which also need a low pass, and then a synth line that you probably didn't write judging by the fact it is a sample, and you have shown you don't have much skill with melody or sound design.
in short, ambivlnc won, and lil sparky could do better.
i could say sum mean, but you already know the truth so why bother. ambivlnc was actually suprisingly neat, considering i didnt expect much going into this tho