ok. this needs a bit of work. the mixing is not very good. the song itself is VERY redundant. i think u have a limiter on ur master channel and it makes the song really nasty. take off the limiter and redo the mixing. also the build up needs a lot of work. i dont love the drop melody and the sidechain is quite heavy. also make sure ur staying on beat. in some pplaces, it sounds like you dont stay on beat. also maybe add an intro, the song starts too suddenly