Sound pretty cool my friend. I would turn the kick down a lot and compress it. Then like already suggested below, add a bassline for it. Other than that you sound good dude. Keep up the good work my friend. I got faith in you!
Lets get serous. Intro not bad but just too much silence. The build so far is calming. NO keep the vocals through the whole intro.It gave it that perfect high end feeling. The nice pluck it a lil too hard hitting in the beggening.. The transition into the melody was nice but a lil abrupt. Maybe a different kick. Just plain rn. Needs bass. Change up the high hat pattern up here and their. The second sparkly lead is nice. It does have a lil too much attack. Third lead/pad was fire. NNEEDD BASSSSSS