Then you moved onto a okay pieced together bass drop, and then kind of drited off into normality. Good for a first song, but at about half way, it drifted off into retardedness. Then at the end, with that one bass drop, I grew impressed again. And at the end, it got back to being okay. Overall, an okay song. Sounded more like you were playing around with sounds rather then making music. 6/10.
You're use of kicks was kind of bad. The drum and bass bass drop was pretty cool. You're cut off with the guy yelling Mother Fucker!!! kind of didn't work well. And when you added that one bass drop with the drum and bass you ruined the song a bit. Got kind of better after that. And after the bass drops you had all these right gay beats.