This mix is bad you need to work on that the melody lead is way too drowned out and its not fitting right with the mix due to the lack of proper eqing bringing out some mids. The lfo hover in the beginning needs the 3k lowered, The drum loop is bad imo, The risers need work. the chord are alright the melody isn't too catchy. I like what you did with the sub tho, This has a really nice idea overall just poorly executed but we all learn and i hope to see more from you :) <3
i like this a lot actually. at the beginning when you have the lfo rate at 1/8 i think? chop up the chords a bit, throw some reverb on that snare too. Nice job overall tho!
Dude your pads are there in terms of pattern, this is great! I do recommend some compressing and eq'ing. When making this future bass stuff I would really get into learning the stereo detune and hookintb it up eith some reverb.