quiet in spots = I thought there were spots where the vocals could be more prominent
like your vcals increase in volume to a pleasant level at
01:06
compared to before that, I felt that the vocals were a bit quieter than they need to be. just my opinion, ya did ask for it lol
I'm also not a fan of the Rasselbok, it sounds cheesy to me, and I don't feel it really fits with the vibe here either the way you used it. But that's just my critique
not sure if I love that chirpy sound in the beginning. kinda messes with the vibe.
I like the vocals but it's a bit too quiet in spots
It would sound a lot nicer if there were more sounds in it as well. It's a bit empty, but a good start! I know that MIDI and vocals can be hard to work with.
i love the reverb atmosphere feeling tho. I'd keep playing on that vibe