ok so i felt like rewriting the story as i noticed some odd writing
South Eastern Baranquon is known for having dark shores due to its sunset-like environment. Its artificial sun comprises gigantic suspended circular lamps which dimly light its landscape and waters. Aion Major does not harbor large seas or oceans, but merely lakes, which have wide shores in their beaches and are clear yet dark due to the lighting. The beaches are visible from the road view, and their names are listed by numbers. South Eastern Baranquon's beaches range from numbers 19 to 25. In South Eastern Baranquon there is a forest, but it's not as prominent as the Western side of Baranquon. The forest's trees are smaller than the rest of Baranquon and are of a different species. Aion Major's position in space and its technological advancements allow for summer-like temperatures of 78°F/25.5°C down to winter-like temperatures of 47°F/8.3°C. One feature that separates South Eastern Baranquon from the rest of Baranquon's locations are its volcanic-like structures created to resemble volcanoes, but which are artificial and do not erupt. These artificial volcanoes are exclusive to South Eastern Baranquon. A slight vanilla-like smell permeates the atmosphere surrounding South Eastern Baranquon.
I used my guitar to create some of the patterns in this ambient music.
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thank you for this and thanks for the help.
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↓ rewritten story below :) ↓
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South Eastern Baranquon is known for having dark shores due to its sunset-like environment. Its artificial sun comprises gigantic suspended circular lamps which dimly light its landscape and waters. Aion Major does not harbor large seas or oceans, but merely lakes, which have wide shores in their beaches and are clear yet dark due to the lighting. The beaches are visible from the road view, and their names are listed by numbers. South Eastern Baranquon's beaches range from numbers 19 to 25.
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Nice job,bro.
