Had such a fun time working on this with HTR, great artist and an even greater person. <3 I invited him when this was only the first drop and we were able to spin this out, and I think we did an alright job. Thanks so much for working on this with me! Enjoy guys :)
It is missing a lot sadly, like I explained to Noir we both kinda hit a wall on the last bit and we just tried to salvage what ideas we could. But, I really appreciate you <3 your comments always mean a lot
I like this a lot!
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needs some tlc. The main synth there is really dynamic in the short term but fairly static in phrasing, so it could use some more shaping to the phrase. The mix there especially needs attention, since everything is getting covered up by that bass. The ending doesn't work for me, hitting a high velocity groove like that, coasting a bit, building up even more, and then doing nothing from there feels somewhat unsatisfying. You almost treat it as an ambient section...
Now this is good crit!! I spent much more time phrasing and constructing the first
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, beyond that point I think we hit a wall on where to take the track and the end result was created through a lack of idea. Near the end as well it seemed something was eating at our computers, unsure as to what as my laptop has handled much bigger drafts. But, I appreciate your crit as always :3 you’re one of the biggest reasons I ever improved in the first place. Appreciate you <3
At the very end, which I think could make a satisfying ending to the track if it's treated well. Just something to bring the listener back home, since up to that point it's been a smooth track, stopping suddenly is pretty jarring.