2. the beat is 2010 af, you should do some research on the genres you wanna be and then some out of the circle
3. you sound like you're trying to not wake up your parents or something, sing with the power and amplitude that you want your music to have, else it just sounds really newbie
4. water
5. drums should have more variety over the course of the song alongside more percussive sounds to fill the space
my main issue with it is just that i feel you can put more power into your voice while maintaining that deep scratchy tone, but just boosting the volume makes it sound out of place in the mix
Funny enough, I drink a lot of water while recording so my voice doesn't die on me because I do a lot of my songs with that deep scratchy voice as well as screaming