Very nice slow melodic percussion. very useful fading in and out. i would also like to pull your attention to the musical clarity of the piece, very nice mellow feel and i like how shifts from major to minor often
i like that you used no samples or presets in this song. i do agree with
@muffin07
however in that the melody is pretty random. it doesn't seem to fit the chord changes. and the sliding notes seem a bit too chaotic for the song. but overall good job. just add some percussion and make the plucks fit the chord changes. :)
nice sounds, but the melody is a bit too random. If you add more bass and possibly chilled hip hop drums this would be better. Its a good song, just I want to help you instead of saying "good" and moving on to the next song.