From the picture I would like to congratulate you on your expert use of the mandolin in this track and I hope to hear more of it on the finished track! :)
wow! i really like that beginning synth, but PLEASE PLEASE TURN IT DOWN. just turn all of your synths down. i really love the bass!!! that snare i really dont like either but its just personal taste. but you are losing sound like crazy...not clipping because you dont have the limiter off, but i can hear sound loss on either ear. just lower the volume. but the music is great! awesome work! :)