I actually put a lot of effort into this, ive never pushed my self this hard for a single track.

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  • Its been 3 months and i havent found a better song on audiotool.

    You r 4 real A MoOIK MASTER

  • I actually Like this Alot.

    Like for Real This is Realz.

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  • hey, 20 favs lol

  • negatives: I feel like the second chord used at 0:17 sounds a little off, the gunshot roll and the drop at :052 is kinda empty and could use a strong lead, and the drop outs for the coins & arps at 1:54 are all a bit to atonal for the song.

    positives: it sounds like you put a lot of effort into this, I'm glad you're using your synths and playing around with the tools audiotool provides. Great work over all! Sorry if I was too negative, I just wanted to be thorough on what you could fix

    • yeah no worries, just needed to know what too add lol thanks!

  • dope shit Broskie

  • Far away from my personal taste but definitely a perfectly produced track of that direction. Thumbs up

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  • Hey, nice track! I'd revise the chords a bit to make the progression more interesting, making sure that you're using notes within your key and finding better transitions. You can also vary the progression so that sometimes (at the end of a section) the last chord is different. That's a good way to give your track more interest and structure. I'd also vary the vocals, maybe spicing things up a bit with a Rasselbock. You might want to check Ollie's tracks for inspiration. Good work!

    • Thanks for the advice and tips! i will work on it when i get the chance!

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    wasnt playing

  • needs that kick to have more effect, more punch, and bass. mixing as well, but otherwise pretty good.

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    couple edits

  • Nice concept, but the vocals get annoying after a while :/

    • huh, didnt really realize, i'll go in later and mix it up a bit. thanks!

  • WRONG, I DO LIKE THIS! I LOVE THE CHORDS AND IT DOESN'T SOUND TOO HAPPY. AYE!

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  • Ehhhhhhhh... ok at best? I understand what you're trying to do, you just need to fix and add some more. You'll get there.

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