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Luminoux
My names Lumi and I'm zooming in and out of all these traps,
john cena couldnt see me cuz I grew up with them savs,
keep a pump at my dads, and you know I keep a strap,
lotta evil people out here tryna reap on what I have,
all these haters talk about me please come say it to my face,
if push came to shove you couldn't keep up with my pace,
its true in what they say that slow and steady wins the race,
i keep the game honest and my drugs are never laced,
you disgrace, you aint got nothing on me,
I know I accidentally stole your bitch I'm sorry,
you know I gotta keep a full clip on me,
i started after last year when they shot my homie.
my names Lumi and I keep the dice rolling,
keep packs moving knocking pins like I'm bowling, (kingpins)
overflowing in pussy so don't get your girl tookin,
always looking over my shoulder so i don't get booked in.
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[ꂑ♥ꌇ]GreenTeaⅽ[ː̠̈ː̠̈] SR
fuck all that shit
and i made yo bitch boring
pullup the foreign
i made yo bitch pouring
call me at morning
her text im ignoring
she tried to test me
but im still recording
I churn up all the butter
and i make it to milk
and then she make it explode
within a little bit of guilt
I speed out around the track
going 90 imma tilt
im fucking with a case
then i fake all to built
Hitten round the corner
bitch why you tasty
you whippen round that ass
but why you so pasty
im shopping for a suit
but its only at macy's
im rocking in the green
I got my girl katy
I aint got time for the wap
yo mama on my dick
and you know I got top
damn
girl
what you gotta do
i aint paying you,
whatcu tryna put me through
spearing through leg
now i can't get to you
how can I walk
when yo boy he got the talk
a bullet to the head
then i slapped him with the chalk
got dozens of these hoes
revolving round my cock
ooh
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1 Honestly. I like the beat. However, both of y'all need a better mic. Ik you're working with what you got but I'm just sayin. Song needs more bass and the melody needs to change every once in a while so that same sound isn't so boring. The bpm change could have progressively gotten slower with the fade out instead of just immediately changing. Reverb on the melody and vocals would've been nice and more sidechaining on the vocals so no random air is there. That's all I have to say. Keep grindin.
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0 Republished
further edits
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0 For those who wanna know, Luminoux was the first verse, and I start at like 1:13
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0 Republished
i fixed my vocals
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0 i gotta repub