I pretty much gave up on getting the first track to sound good, so here's my second. Thanks Olaf for showing me how to get the background parts to work. When I wrote this, I imagined what it would be like to float above the tops of the clouds, and this is what came out. I'm very pleased with it. Please, feel free to remix.
Edit: Changed the main background. Messed with a bassline but decided against it. Fixed the silece. Edited the Percussion volume. Is it better now?
I practice piano, especially chord voicings and progressions, but I still wouldn't say I'm very skilled. I usually play Jazz and Classical saxophone and clarinet. It's fun!