Also awkward silences at
2:53
and
3:07
, the yup is alos out of place, try reverbing it a bit and lowering the volume so it fits more with the drop. The whole song could use a sub, or a stronger one if you have one. Nice job with the pads and the lead melody and chord wise. That lead is just a bit boring though, adding just a little vibrato to it would make it more interesting haha. Nice job though m8, really like this one. :)
Louder ;) Don't stop raising the level until the loudest parts of the song are just barely clipping, you wanna get it as loud as you can without clipping, most of the time at least. Also that weird bass pitching you have going on like at the beginning and in the middle of the song doesn't sound very pleasing lol. It sounds okay in the drop, but again sounds very odd at
1:24
and so on. I'd take out that pitch thing you have going on in that section of the song along with the intro and verse.