I really like the track man it's great. Its cool the way you incorporated some of the synth for some idk how you say kinda sounds like some dubstep stuff, but anyways everything really flows well together on this piece. Nice work!
first thing fix the levels. this needs compression its clipping badly I like it alot though very cool @
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not so much it seems very random I like the vocals though! @
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its a bit better good attempt but really fix the levels look at anyone elses tracks and their waveforms arent that big. the ending is cool too!